1. If this is supposed to be immersive or rather inclusive, than the art should go with the story.What I had hoped would be (as advertised) an immersive world of engaging stories turned out to be a poorly coordinated blend of banal new age music, uninteresting abstract images, and a series of amateur and mediocre short stories.
2. Music could be integrated into the story better, and while lyrically I appreciated some of the songs, they just weren't my cup of tea soundwise.Not Immersive in 2022 Standards.. defined as a three dimensional image that surrounds the viewer.
3. To make matters worse, actually trying to "immerse" oneself in these stories (combining the art & music with the reading) is next to impossible, since the controls to browse through the pages are awkward and clumsy, and often useless if the app becomes stalled.
4. Getting back to the story wasn't helpful, because I had no way of marking the page from which I could resume reading.I read Rin, Tongue, and Dorner.
5. TerribleThe idea of this app is great, the music and artwork are great, but the books are some of the worst I've ever read.
6. Overall, I liked this and will be reading some of the other books on the app.Interesting concept, and the story I started Animus appeared to be well edited.
7. This is supposed to be immersive, I am going to presume that the "immersive" part has nothing to do with the music or the art work.
8. In 2022 things should be opening as reader goes along, music starting on its own, a map said to be exploratory is a black and white image that goes no deeper and I could go on and on.
9. These books and this app are not worth anyone's time.Listening to the music while reading was very unique.
10. The text for the books, no matter what font size you use, cuts off the end of every line, missing up to 2 words per line.
11. I'm not sure how the artwork is supposed to work in the one book I started reading.
I won a copy of "Balcony of Fog" but I received 2 copies. How do I return one?